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What do you think of this poem? Please read short?

What do you think of this poem? Please read short? Topic: Homework i love you poem
July 16, 2019 / By Despina
Question: I'm 14 yrs. and I'm really into all of the arts, performing, and physical and I had sudden inspiration, what do you think? These Have I loved These have I loved, the crisp feeling in my eyelids as I open my eyes in the early beautiful morning, The soft welcoming feeling I feel as I step on the soft carpet getting out of bed, The warm steaming mist that flows down my back while I rinse the soap out of my hair, The thick, minty, freshening taste of toothpaste in my mouth before I go to school, The heartwarming, echoing sound of laughter as I approach the school yard, The anticipated sound of the lunch bell at noon, The exciting, joyous, leaping feeling thirty seconds before the bell rings for the end of school, The sweet, welcoming smell of the roses in my front yard indicating the last seconds of my walk home, The last tender scratch of a pencil on paper that signals the end of homework, The crinkle of the pages turning while reading my night time story, The way my head always grows heavier the closer it gets to my pillow, These have I loved, the days in counting
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Cammie Cammie | 3 days ago
WOW!!! Ur good at this kind of stuff!! i realy like it! And i love the way u describe every with such detail it good keep up the good work!
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Cammie Originally Answered: I need help with a poetry writing contest if you are willing to read a short poem read below?
Can't get the link, and could you have copy/pasted here? The issue is certainly a critical one, and hopefully one you can escape from. I wonder how the writing affects healing through venting. Do you find it helps? Certainly at some point everyone in a dark place need to feel hope, and express it, believing in better.
Cammie Originally Answered: I need help with a poetry writing contest if you are willing to read a short poem read below?
It's simply written but to the point that you have fully expressed how you feel. I hope writing takes away your thoughts of suicide. Think positive and surround yourself with people who can help you. Try writing a list of what are the good things that you have done to justify your presence on this earth and why you should take a stronger hold of your life. Wish you the best.

Amalea Amalea
I actually really like it! you should show your english teacher! its awesome and you have a really good talent for poetry =)
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Amalea Originally Answered: Help with my short poem please?
I like it a lot, although I think that the second verse maybe has one line too many. How about something like; 'No longer would we have to see, The sacred bowing at our feet, We'll see the world, together we'll be Hand in hand for eternity.' But other than that, it's brilliant - it's really well structured and very well written :D
Amalea Originally Answered: Help with my short poem please?
Was it your dream, That we would be, Free from this land, And all its misery? No longer would there be, The sacred bowing at some feet, The world we'd see, you and me, And together we'll be, The rest of all eternity. I had a dream where you and me, Were free as we're supposed to be And its just you and me and everybody Together at last in bliss for all eternity.

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