Need help with poem before going to shrink tomorrow?
Topic: How to write a sense of time poem
May 21, 2019 / By Demi Question:
okay so im not good with talking to people so my shrink asked me to write a poem of how i see life i dont know if it makes sense and dont want to look stupid, any feed back cool
It comes from within
its like a sadicism reality
a detach from emotion
with a cruel way of seeing a sinister pleasure
to the dark side of life
Ive tried to contain it
the more i fight, to resist it, the darker it goes
its the knowlege of the other that feeds the beast
to know what is of love and the nature of good
is to see the darkness in which we come from
all we can be is a mere bubble in the ocean of time
Knowelge feeds this beast
To commit a union of approval
The feeling of seperation, detachment
and the sience begins to intruige the mind
Exam the rawness of life,
a body which is dead hold no value of life
therefor has no soul,
Understanding this body were in and this universe of his way
His choice of normality and our feeble way of understanding
Still imature till death
no more mature than birth
Then how can you resist the darkness
how can anyone judge
what could be right what could be wrong
Best Answers: Need help with poem before going to shrink tomorrow?
Calanthe | 10 days ago
Your writing is complex and shows a lot of depth. Certainly will not come across stupid. With a little work this could be really good. Good luck with the shrink. We've all been there.
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Originally Answered: Help with Quatrain poem please please please help due tomorrow?
write your own quatrain, the clock is ticking....
I would not encourage you to take someone elses work to pass off as your own, anyone who would give you a poem to use in this way is selling you short. They are as guilty as you when it comes to cheating.
You have the groundrules, go to rhyme zone and line up the end words and write up to them if that helps..
Good luck !
This is an exercise your doctor is having you do,
Whatever you write will be great-
The point of the exercise is that he or she will ask you to explain what different things mean, and then ask you to relate it to your life.
Thus they will be happy with anything.
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There's no way you will look stupid. You have done what was asked of you, so relax until your appointment and see what comes next.
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UUmmm..basicaly i dont understand it i guyess im not that "deep " lol jk but you wrote it and if u understand this then thats just fine!!
PS: you need jesus!
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Originally Answered: Help me write a poem for tomorrow?
so far i think it is very good, but i am a big fan of rhyming so heres my idea, but yours is very good :
If Only i could go back in time
and change everything that didnt turn out right
turn the sadness into happiness
and the darkness into light
If Only i could see all the things that are in store for me
be reassured that things will be great for myself and my family
If Only things in life were just right, hurt and sadness would go away
everyone would be happy, and wear a smile all day
If Only war and hate would stop and people get a long
Join together and be as one and sing a merry song
If Only things in life were great and happiness meant to be
I hope and prayer the world be great.............If Only
Hope i helped a bit, good luck, let me know the finished poem and whay your teacher says ok? put it as an edit on here xxx