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Someone please help me browse this written sentence. Does it sound alright? Topic: How to write a resume with 2 years experience
June 25, 2019 / By Al
Question: I also have 2 years of overseas living experience in Canada which gave me an opportunity to blend in with the natives and provided and enhanced my global vision in the commercial community. FYI, I am a non English native. I have written this sentence as part of my resume used for job hunting. Is there anything that is structurally, grammatically or logically wrong with it? moreover, could you play around with it using better words to make it more sensible or appealing ? You may even cross out the whole commercial community thing and substitute for something else that makes more sense. I trust you more than i trust myself :) Much Appreciated.
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Suzie Suzie | 2 days ago
Sorry, but there is not much right about this. "Blend in with the natives"?? What the hell does that mean? Did you spend time out on the ice with the Inuit? How did it provide and enhance your global vision (whatever the hell that means. It was one country, not the entire world) in the commercial community? Did you work for an international company? Did you work at all or were you there for study. I have resumes come across my desk every day, if I read this I would simply throw yours away. Be clear, be concise and don't try to lie. People are going to be impressed that you lived in Canada, don't try and get any more out of the experience than that.
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Suzie Originally Answered: Someone please help me browse this written sentence. Does it sound alright?
Sorry, but there is not much right about this. "Blend in with the natives"?? What the hell does that mean? Did you spend time out on the ice with the Inuit? How did it provide and enhance your global vision (whatever the hell that means. It was one country, not the entire world) in the commercial community? Did you work for an international company? Did you work at all or were you there for study. I have resumes come across my desk every day, if I read this I would simply throw yours away. Be clear, be concise and don't try to lie. People are going to be impressed that you lived in Canada, don't try and get any more out of the experience than that.
Suzie Originally Answered: Someone please help me browse this written sentence. Does it sound alright?
I also have 2 years of living experience overseas in Canada which gave me an opportunity to blend in with the natives (NOTE: I'm not sure what you meant by native, but in my opinion, this sounds a bit like you're referring to Native Americans) which has provided me with and enhanced my global vision in the commercial community.

Raylene Raylene
I also have 2 years of living experience overseas in Canada which gave me an opportunity to blend in with the natives (NOTE: I'm not sure what you meant by native, but in my opinion, this sounds a bit like you're referring to Native Americans) which has provided me with and enhanced my global vision in the commercial community.
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Merit Merit
In addition, I have had the experience of living overseas in Candada for two years. This provided me with the opportunity to get a great perception of the citizens there. Furthermore, this aided my to enhance my global vision in the commercial community. I have just changed it up a bit but try to keep everything the same because I don't really know what your global vision is and stuff. Hope this helps, good luck!
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